The Pick Up Line Game #2

[aeriedraconia.livejournal.com]

We haven't played this game for a while.


The Pick Up line/Opening Line/First line Game

Post the first line of the main story or stories that you are working on.

Then, those of us reading them can reply with:
Does it or doesn't it make you want to read more?

And for the fun of it:
Guess the genre?
Guess what happens next?

Comments

[secondlongest.livejournal.com]

The lonely stretch of highway led them to a small, empty town. A bent and rusty shopping cart lay on it's side in an empty parking lot.

[the-mome-wrath.livejournal.com]

Read more: Maybe, it would really depend on the next few sentences.
genre: disaster, horror or scifi dystopia
what's next: Scene and mood setting, then enter the main character