A new member looking for feedback

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So I am a new member not only to this community/ group but also to LJ and am in the process of starting a new path in my life, hoping to head down a road filled with books. I have a story that I started writing several months ago but lost inspiration as the holidays arrived. I am hoping that I could get some feedback as to whether I should continue writing. If I do decided to finish this story I believe I should go back and add more details and lengthen the chapters. Anywho, any honest opinions, critique, etc. would be greatly appreciated (and please don't worry about hurting my feelings, I would like real honest critique).

Title: Tamlyn Marie's Grace
By: Myself, Angie Stroud (easternsunset)
Fantasy Fiction
Maybe Teen (for some mild violence)

 

( Chapters 1 - 6 )

I really hope I did this cut thing right.


Thanks so much for any help :D

~Ang