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secondlongest.livejournal.com2011-02-05 09:47 pm
Walkabout part 2
I would like to receive feedback on this chapter, as I would like to hear some suggestions for future installments of this story.
Title: Walkabout
Rating: PG13 to R
Warnings: Violence, grotesque imagery, dark themes
Summary: Hyde and Anne continue their lonely trek through a ruined America
Excerpt: "The lonely highway had led them to a small town. A bent and rusted shopping cart lay on its side in a vacant parking lot.
The sky was blanketed with gray clouds that seemed to suck the color out of the landscape. A faint echo of thunder rang out in the distance every few minutes."
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Title: Walkabout
Rating: PG13 to R
Warnings: Violence, grotesque imagery, dark themes
Summary: Hyde and Anne continue their lonely trek through a ruined America
Excerpt: "The lonely highway had led them to a small town. A bent and rusted shopping cart lay on its side in a vacant parking lot.
The sky was blanketed with gray clouds that seemed to suck the color out of the landscape. A faint echo of thunder rang out in the distance every few minutes."
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