It's a third person narrative, so the main character isn't telling the story, but the story is told from her perspective - sort of looking over her shoulder.
The first parts of the rough draft are here (http://baltimoreandme.livejournal.com/26325.html), here (http://baltimoreandme.livejournal.com/28156.html) and here (http://baltimoreandme.livejournal.com/30912.html).
What I am concerned about is the character called Abigail - I want to give the reader a sense that what she is actually like is quite distinct from what the main character, Christine, thinks she is like, but as a result I think it's just confusing.
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Date: 2009-01-24 04:22 pm (UTC)The first parts of the rough draft are here (http://baltimoreandme.livejournal.com/26325.html), here (http://baltimoreandme.livejournal.com/28156.html) and here (http://baltimoreandme.livejournal.com/30912.html).
What I am concerned about is the character called Abigail - I want to give the reader a sense that what she is actually like is quite distinct from what the main character, Christine, thinks she is like, but as a result I think it's just confusing.