Cool fantasy story

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Starting to write a new fantasy/RPG like story, so tell me what you think:

Shadowed Jewels Of Corinth (Chp 1)

Shadowed Jewels Of Corinth (Chp 2)

I also have it posted at FictionPress.com if you prefer to read it there :)

FictionPress story link

Sorry the chapters are so short. They look long on paper, but when you type them up they end up being a lot shorter than you think they will be! lol
Anyway, enjoy the story!

-Andro