Hello! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, that makes my day!

Thank you for the nitpicks, I love nitpicks because I hate it when I've read something twenty million times and then realize that I had an extra o on to, lol. So it's very nice when someone can point those out to me because my brain took a holiday, I've now fixed those :-)

The rundown is definitely a bit long. I've cut out lots of exposition but clearly have more work to do on the showing versus telling so I'm now working on paring that scene down some more.

Thank you again for the comments and I'm glad you liked it and hope you like the rest as well.