http://shinoakkitenshi.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shinoakkitenshi.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2009-09-10 05:30 pm (UTC)

Not a problem my dear, I just wish it could have been more helpful.

And details about the carraige would be good, even if it was just to say it was a trade/cargo carraige. Sometimes it takes only two or three words to give the reader all they need to form the visual picture in their mind.
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