http://kittybop.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kittybop.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2009-10-05 08:33 pm (UTC)

It's a one-shot. I may add some later, but not in terms of chapters or anything. And thanks for the critique! I know the last paragraph is a little strange, so I'm still trying to edit it a bit.
Also, I haven't seen Equilibrium... what's it about?

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