I'm still a learner myself (even if they do teach grammer and spelling at my school, lol ^.^) but I've learned from the best here so I think I could help you to an extent... although I don't really know what your asking in your example. I know that one of my betas have told me about your example but I'm kind of confused at what your asking. So if you could elaborate a little more I think I could help you out. Unless of course someone else tells you before I can.
Well welcom again! Hope to read future stuff from you (and help out as best as I can) or maybe short stories that doesn't have to do with the book your working on because I would know the how you'd feel about posting your book here because someone could copy right, right? I too am writing a book - sorry I'm rambling! ^.^
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I'm still a learner myself (even if they do teach grammer and spelling at my school, lol ^.^) but I've learned from the best here so I think I could help you to an extent... although I don't really know what your asking in your example. I know that one of my betas have told me about your example but I'm kind of confused at what your asking. So if you could elaborate a little more I think I could help you out. Unless of course someone else tells you before I can.
Well welcom again! Hope to read future stuff from you (and help out as best as I can) or maybe short stories that doesn't have to do with the book your working on because I would know the how you'd feel about posting your book here because someone could copy right, right? I too am writing a book - sorry I'm rambling! ^.^
peace.love.happiness.
- Rosie