http://twistedmolds.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] twistedmolds.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft2009-12-14 08:57 pm

Constructive criticism?

Just taking a wee shot in the dark. I'm looking to become a great writer, and I need advice, suggestions, and tips from strangers rather than close friends due to the fact that I know they sugar-coat things. Anyway, it's dark humor and it's about a depressed man who see's his dead wife and decides to pursue her.

'The Seven Stages of Grief'