The Pick Up Line Game #2

[aeriedraconia.livejournal.com]

We haven't played this game for a while.


The Pick Up line/Opening Line/First line Game

Post the first line of the main story or stories that you are working on.

Then, those of us reading them can reply with:
Does it or doesn't it make you want to read more?

And for the fun of it:
Guess the genre?
Guess what happens next?

Comments

[starlight83.livejournal.com]

Want to read more: Yes. This is great.
Genre: Mainstream/slice of life
What happens next: He actually goes to a fair and is seriously disappointed.

[knittingknots.livejournal.com]

It's actually a fantasy story. It opens with him on the grounds of a medieval-style fair, where he is working for a merchant...At this point, he's actually just wanting to get some lunch, but he's about to run into some serious trouble...