ext_22947 ([identity profile] aeriedraconia.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft2011-01-26 10:12 pm
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The Pick Up Line Game #2

We haven't played this game for a while.


The Pick Up line/Opening Line/First line Game

Post the first line of the main story or stories that you are working on.

Then, those of us reading them can reply with:
Does it or doesn't it make you want to read more?

And for the fun of it:
Guess the genre?
Guess what happens next?

[identity profile] vflower.livejournal.com 2011-01-28 09:37 am (UTC)(link)
Hmm... it's very descriptive and image driven but the line doesn't really tell me as the reader anything at all.

Genre: Fiction, mystery, or adventure

What happens: Not sure... the main character sneaks through something but what, we're not sure.