http://secondlongest.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] secondlongest.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2011-02-06 09:07 am (UTC)

I like what you have so far. The opening lines very effectively paint a picture of an unpleasant, dark world. Erica is a likable character so far. The story is well written and interesting. Keep up the good work.
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