Need crituque on prologue

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This is the prologue to My Novel, Imagine. I started writing this in the ninth grade as an attempt at a short story, and it just grew.
The one thing I would really like to know is: if you picked this up in the library, and read just this part, would you check it out and continue to read it? Why or why not. Any extra input is much appreciated.

( Imagine: Prologue )

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Title: Still none :/ - Suggestions?
Rating: I would say PG-13 for drug references/use and cursing.
Comments/Warnings: Any criticism is welcome except for that of spelling grammar puncuation etc. It's not my main point in writing - plus I need a beta - comment if you're willing and able!
Summary: Kate runs from more trouble -And bumps into someone in an unexpected place?
Previous Chapters: 1

( Sorry I suck at giving summaries :( )

Alright, I definitely need a beta. I was gonna fix this more but I kinda gave up.
Who's up for it?