Needs Edit Desperately!

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This is for school and I need someone - just one - to critique my -- I mean our story. Our being my group I was in. I'd just like to say: bear in mind I was working with three teenage boys so I don't care about the logic, the characters, and the fact that this isn't very believable. I just need spelling, and grammer and maybe a pinch here and there where it doesn't add up because of past evidence. So please, please help a girl out here!

Also, to wrap it all up I need you to take a poll to rate my story. It's 1-5 and you can make any comments (with your edits in the commet box) to support the score. Thanks!

( Cookies: a Lovely Treat or a Death Sentence? )

Thanks again for doing this for me. I really appreciate it.

peace.love.happiness.

- Rosie