http://takobob.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] takobob.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2008-06-03 11:55 pm (UTC)

Oh My GOSH I cannot believe that there is only one other comment on here. This was REALLY good. It made me feel a lot of emotion. The only thing I would work on is working in the he said, she said, or things like that. But overall, very, VERY nice.
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