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writers_loft2008-10-21 12:07 pm
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Original Fiction - Meetings
Title:Meetings
Rating: PG-13 (Dec 2006)
Words: 3,500
Genre: Original Fantasy
Summary: Outcast by the Order for his abilities, Tristain has been in hiding for years. But sometimes the enemy of your enemy is your friend. Wrote within the Naricaii world.
A/N - This was written within a world I created called Morien. I never finished the story, but had a vague idea of the mytharc. I guess what I'm looking for is feedback on the characterisations, because to-date, I've never managed to write likeable original characters.
Link - My Journal
Rating: PG-13 (Dec 2006)
Words: 3,500
Genre: Original Fantasy
Summary: Outcast by the Order for his abilities, Tristain has been in hiding for years. But sometimes the enemy of your enemy is your friend. Wrote within the Naricaii world.
A/N - This was written within a world I created called Morien. I never finished the story, but had a vague idea of the mytharc. I guess what I'm looking for is feedback on the characterisations, because to-date, I've never managed to write likeable original characters.
Link - My Journal