http://delurfangs.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] delurfangs.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2009-01-24 01:20 pm (UTC)

is it wrriten from the point of view of the narrator telling things as they happen or is s/he looking back at things.
post a little bit of it and i will try to help more

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting