http://easternsunset.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] easternsunset.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2009-03-13 08:30 pm (UTC)

Thank you davien for those suggestions, this is a very rough first draft and I am sure there are insane amounts of errors. I was just writing as fast as possible trying to get the main ideas down.

Thank you again for your ideas and corrections!
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