http://jinkang.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jinkang.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2009-03-13 01:52 am (UTC)

Seems my story is missing a lot of articles and modifiers. I'm gonna put them on my 'editing check list' and hopefully correct it there.

And definitely write simple and clear sentences. :)

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