http://wilygriffin.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] wilygriffin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2009-03-31 05:16 am (UTC)

I particularly like how you described Regan's meditation and thought processes. The part that hung me up was his "longish hair." I take it, this is chapter 5? Is this physical character description at this point redundant in the storyline?
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