Well welcome, and I'd love to read what you have to write. where is ur story posted? Also I'd like to c what you think of mine, I posted part of my first chapter on my blog so I can check urs out and u can check mine out... (i kind of changed some of it, so i'll have to post the revision later) if u want. but i'll check ur's out anyway.

if u do check it out, tell me what u think.

Welcome again, ^.^