http://insane-poet-46.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] insane-poet-46.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2009-07-30 03:10 am (UTC)

Need critique on a basic point

The reason I'm hoping to get some critique early on is because there is an issue which could be fundamental to the entire work. I am a 62 year old man attempting to write in the voice (first person) of a 14 year old girl. I need some basic feedback on whether the character, her associates, and her voice are realistic, believable and sympathetic before I invest a huge amount of effort in getting it wrong.

-Steve
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