http://rosalinda-143.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rosalinda-143.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2010-03-06 06:05 am (UTC)

Thanks! That does help. But for number 1 I meant should I have what the protagonist is saying in the same paragraph or should I make it another paragraph like I was told a million times during school? Because sometimes I see them do that and sometimes I don't and I'm just a little confused on that.

Thanks again! That really does help!

peace.love.happiness.

~ Rosie
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