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Questions!
Haven't had a question in a while... but now...
Which one(s) would be right?
1. I don't like this type of shoes
2. I don't like these type of shoes
3. I don't like these types of shoes
4. I don't like this type of shoe
The next one is easier done in an example:
When I asked Skye about that, she told me that they cut a hole in my trachea and actually inserted a tube into it because I wasn't breathing on my own, and I had a lot of blood in my throat (or esophagus so they couldn't put a tube down that way).
or
When I asked Skye about that, she told me that they cut a hole in my trachea and actually inserted a tube into it because I wasn't breathing on my own, and I had a lot of blood in my throat. (Or esophagus so they couldn't put a tube down that way.)
Or are they both right. Or does it depend on how the sentence is worded...?
Well, thanks for listening, and thanks in advanced!
peace.love.happiness.
~ J
Which one(s) would be right?
1. I don't like this type of shoes
2. I don't like these type of shoes
3. I don't like these types of shoes
4. I don't like this type of shoe
The next one is easier done in an example:
When I asked Skye about that, she told me that they cut a hole in my trachea and actually inserted a tube into it because I wasn't breathing on my own, and I had a lot of blood in my throat (or esophagus so they couldn't put a tube down that way).
or
When I asked Skye about that, she told me that they cut a hole in my trachea and actually inserted a tube into it because I wasn't breathing on my own, and I had a lot of blood in my throat. (Or esophagus so they couldn't put a tube down that way.)
Or are they both right. Or does it depend on how the sentence is worded...?
Well, thanks for listening, and thanks in advanced!
peace.love.happiness.
~ J
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The first. You can't start a sentence with or. Although I'm not sure why anyone would think of inserting a tube into the oesophagus to aid breathing in the first place?
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In the second one, I presume you areusing 'eosphagus' as another word for 'throat', so in that case you would just put parentheses around the phrase 'or esophagus', thus:When I asked Skye about that, she told me that they cut a hole in my trachea and actually inserted a tube into it because I wasn't breathing on my own, and I had a lot of blood in my throat (or esophagus) so they couldn't put a tube down that way.
Of course, you might be saying that they couldn't put a tube down that way because 'that way' is called 'eosphagus', which would make your first use perfectly correct, as
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