http://vflower.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] vflower.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2011-01-28 09:37 am (UTC)

Hmm... it's very descriptive and image driven but the line doesn't really tell me as the reader anything at all.

Genre: Fiction, mystery, or adventure

What happens: Not sure... the main character sneaks through something but what, we're not sure.

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