http://artierayne.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] artierayne.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft 2011-02-19 06:18 pm (UTC)

Want to read more: Yes, its defintely a very catching line.

Genre: Little uncertain, could really open up to go in any direction. But I pick fantasy because it's my favourite.

What happens next: I would guess that an actual fair comes into play, although for better or worse is questionable.

Very nice start, really love the descriptors you used.

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