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Peer Review help
I had to write a narrtive for my college english class but I could not make it to class the peer review day. I was wondering if anyone could look over this and give me some suggestions. Fanfiction and such were allowed so please ignore the fact that the local is in a game. Thank you so much your your help!
( Narrtive )
( Narrtive )