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writers_loft2008-08-28 07:47 pm
lil-eee.livejournal.com) wrote in writers_loft2008-08-28 07:47 pm
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i need to write something for school.
something to impress the teacher
i had this great idea.
it's this kid, he's at his first concert. and everything is moving around him, while he just stands there and observes it all. But I don't know how to write it.
i got tired of it. and gave up.
i wrote one paragraph. and now i have nothing else.
any help?
or any other ideas for a short story?
He eases his way throught the small crowd. Slender finges wrapping around the grimy bar. The lights dim, the crowd roaring in his eardrums. The band jumps onstage, launching into their first melody. He knows this song by heart, from every sweeet lyric that pours from the singers mouth, to the notes the guitarists fingers are pounding out. He's mouthing the words, eyes locked on the singer.
something to impress the teacher
i had this great idea.
it's this kid, he's at his first concert. and everything is moving around him, while he just stands there and observes it all. But I don't know how to write it.
i got tired of it. and gave up.
i wrote one paragraph. and now i have nothing else.
any help?
or any other ideas for a short story?
He eases his way throught the small crowd. Slender finges wrapping around the grimy bar. The lights dim, the crowd roaring in his eardrums. The band jumps onstage, launching into their first melody. He knows this song by heart, from every sweeet lyric that pours from the singers mouth, to the notes the guitarists fingers are pounding out. He's mouthing the words, eyes locked on the singer.