ext_53991 ([identity profile] jupiterrhode.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft2009-03-30 08:50 am

Dead Boyfriend

Title: Dead Boyfriend
Rating: Chapter Five, PG-13. Overall, NC-17
Warnings: swearing, violence, and gay sex
Summary: Regan St. James is just your typical eighteen-year-old vampire hunter. He enjoys sharp objects and random hook-ups. But one night, in a quiet little mountain college town, he meets a guy named Ira who just might change his life. If he can survive Ira's relatives, of course.

This chapter: Regan primps for his date with Ira.

( Just because I’d agreed to go on a date with a vampire didn’t mean I had to be stupid about it. )

Start at the beginning. Click here.

[identity profile] wilygriffin.livejournal.com 2009-03-31 05:16 am (UTC)(link)
I particularly like how you described Regan's meditation and thought processes. The part that hung me up was his "longish hair." I take it, this is chapter 5? Is this physical character description at this point redundant in the storyline?