I'd take out the 'horny'. It makes it sound like porn XD Unless it is... D:
Here's a rough idea I've come up with. It's probably rubbish XD
[So many] years from now, a young woman struggles against the amorous advances of a powerful vampire. Can Kelsa [insert some character detail here that will help the audience relate to her] fend off the lustful Lord [name] before [something terrible] happens?
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Date: 2009-07-08 02:39 pm (UTC)Here's a rough idea I've come up with. It's probably rubbish XD
[So many] years from now, a young woman struggles against the amorous advances of a powerful vampire. Can Kelsa [insert some character detail here that will help the audience relate to her] fend off the lustful Lord [name] before [something terrible] happens?