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Hello there, new to the comm... I would like some critique/advice/anything on my latest project.
It's about... the excentric owner of an old antique shop. I've not gotten very far yet, I'm working on the introduction which is going to be a number of different parts describing different aspects of the shop and customers etc. Right now I'm not completely sure about where I will take the story, but feel free to take a look, and give me your thoughts!

First part is here, and if you like it, the second part is up here