Date: 2009-10-06 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nontu.livejournal.com
You have a problem with your opening. How can "the City’s hum filled the background" coexist with "The only noise was the quiet shuffle"?
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting
 
Notice: This account is set to log the IP addresses of everyone who comments.
Links will be displayed as unclickable URLs to help prevent spam.

Profile

For Writers of Original Fiction

January 2018

S M T W T F S
  123456
78910111213
14 151617181920
21222324252627
282930 31   

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Aug. 2nd, 2025 05:24 am
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios