He saw her in the rain

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Hey all, I know I haven't posted here very often but I do write and I do pay attention. I am currently trying to improve my writing skills so I would appreciate it if some of you could read this short story I wrote recently. I know it's not a great piece, it's more philosophical than anything, but if you could give me some constructive feedback that would be wonderful.

Thanks again! :D

he saw her in the rain...