You're right of course, I did do all of that! I even noticed the repetition part myself when I re read it earlier. By then I'd already posted it here so I didn't think I'd do it again just because I'd noticed something.
Thanks for the advice and taking the time to type out the message.
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Date: 2009-12-18 10:03 pm (UTC)That's really helpful.
You're right of course, I did do all of that! I even noticed the repetition part myself when I re read it earlier. By then I'd already posted it here so I didn't think I'd do it again just because I'd noticed something.
Thanks for the advice and taking the time to type out the message.
Lucy