you can still write it on a third person POV, but it can either be third person limited (writing through one character's perspective, but you can change perspectives from one character to another but it's best to do it by scene) or third person omniscient (writing through a narrator's perspective - meaning the narrator sees all).
you should, of course, write the dialogue part in sentence form. try describing what's happening and inserting the dialogue appropriately. i.e:
(insert name of character here) paced around the (room/ alley/ wherever the character may be), phone pressed against her ear. She was relieved when a voice came through. "911 emergency, may i help you?"
"Someone's been shot" were the words that instantly left her mouth.
"Who's been shot?" The voice remained calm and in control. "Where are you calling from?"
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Date: 2009-12-31 07:20 am (UTC)you should, of course, write the dialogue part in sentence form. try describing what's happening and inserting the dialogue appropriately. i.e:
(insert name of character here) paced around the (room/ alley/ wherever the character may be), phone pressed against her ear. She was relieved when a voice came through. "911 emergency, may i help you?"
"Someone's been shot" were the words that instantly left her mouth.
"Who's been shot?" The voice remained calm and in control. "Where are you calling from?"
something like that... hope this helps.