Yes, that helps a lot. :) Thanks very much for the advice. Oh, and just one more question? When I post the edited version of this chapter should I delete this one, or leave it up?
(Anyone's free to answer this, if you guys have the time. Thanks again! :>)
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Date: 2010-02-14 02:05 am (UTC)(Anyone's free to answer this, if you guys have the time. Thanks again! :>)