Thanks! That does help. But for number 1 I meant should I have what the protagonist is saying in the same paragraph or should I make it another paragraph like I was told a million times during school? Because sometimes I see them do that and sometimes I don't and I'm just a little confused on that.
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Date: 2010-03-06 06:05 am (UTC)Thanks again! That really does help!
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