Thank you all for the comments and feedback. I guess it's back to the drawing board once again. Most the story has already been written, but I just cannot seem to find a good opening, may have to consider a complete rewrite just to get a decent start with good flow to the rest.
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Date: 2008-03-30 05:18 pm (UTC)