http://canaryh.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] canaryh.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writers_loft2011-01-26 09:04 am

It would be wise to help the reader to decide to read your story

 Hi,

I'm a new member, Ela. I've been lurking for some time. There are a lot of stories without comments here. If a writer wants comments on a story, it would be wise to help the reader to decide to read the story.
  • First, summary is essential. The reader needs a reason to move to the story.
  • Second, it would help if, in the summary, a genre (and sub-genre) would be included. The reader might decide on that fact only.
  • Third, the location of the excerpt should be included. The reader needs to know if she/he is reading the opening chapter or some other part of the story. If it's not the opening chapter some info should be there about the events leading to the excerpt.




[identity profile] aeriedraconia.livejournal.com 2011-01-26 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, I agree with you. :-)

I would also add that the writer might want to state what s/he is looking for from the readers' comments, for example, a critique, grammar, readability, characterization...

[identity profile] starlight83.livejournal.com 2011-01-26 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I completely agree with this.

I generally won't read or comment unless the poster specifies what they're looking for because I don't want to give critique where it's not wanted and end up upsetting someone.

[identity profile] aeriedraconia.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, sometimes it's hard to guess what the writer wants when they don't say anything.

[identity profile] aeriedraconia.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 06:01 am (UTC)(link)
As the _mome_wrath suggested, it's now in the comm guidelines. Thanks for bringing it up.

[identity profile] the-mome-wrath.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
Maybe some kind of template/guideline could be added to the community info for people to follow?

[identity profile] aeriedraconia.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 06:01 am (UTC)(link)
Done!