It would be wise to help the reader to decide to read your story

[canaryh.livejournal.com]

 Hi,

I'm a new member, Ela. I've been lurking for some time. There are a lot of stories without comments here. If a writer wants comments on a story, it would be wise to help the reader to decide to read the story.

• First, summary is essential. The reader needs a reason to move to the story.
• Second, it would help if, in the summary, a genre (and sub-genre) would be included. The reader might decide on that fact only.
• Third, the location of the excerpt should be included. The reader needs to know if she/he is reading the opening chapter or some other part of the story. If it's not the opening chapter some info should be there about the events leading to the excerpt.

Comments

[aeriedraconia.livejournal.com]

Done!