The Pick Up Line Game #2

[aeriedraconia.livejournal.com]

We haven't played this game for a while.


The Pick Up line/Opening Line/First line Game

Post the first line of the main story or stories that you are working on.

Then, those of us reading them can reply with:
Does it or doesn't it make you want to read more?

And for the fun of it:
Guess the genre?
Guess what happens next?

Comments

Re: Pick up line game

[jennyharker.livejournal.com]

The genre is Mainstream or could be Action/Adventure, Mystery, Gay/Lesbian, Humor, take your pick. The following humorous scene is viewed through the eyes of the main character who has the unfortunate habit of thinking out loud.

Re: Pick up line game

[jennyharker.livejournal.com]

I will post the scene on my blog at jennyharker.livejournal.com