Dear Ms. Funk (I assume that Empress is your first name... :)) )--
I wouldn't have expended the effort if I hadn't thought there was something strong hiding in the words you had already written. The group I write with has a saying: "Good enough to hit." The idea is that hitting it will make it better. Do send me a "heads up" if you are doing combat scenes and I will attempt to lend you some advice and verisimilitude.
PS -- Did you do your icon picture? It reminds me of how I feel sometimes, with lots of different aspects demanding my attention, not to mention my characters...
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Date: 2008-04-15 08:45 am (UTC)I wouldn't have expended the effort if I hadn't thought there was something strong hiding in the words you had already written. The group I write with has a saying: "Good enough to hit." The idea is that hitting it will make it better. Do send me a "heads up" if you are doing combat scenes and I will attempt to lend you some advice and verisimilitude.
PS -- Did you do your icon picture? It reminds me of how I feel sometimes, with lots of different aspects demanding my attention, not to mention my characters...