La ville-lumiere

[zonkapasser.livejournal.com]

Hey. So I just joined and I'm going to post the first little bit of what I'm writing currently. Have also written a bit more, but won't post that until I'm entirely happy with this - there's a lot of work needed doing on both sections I think! Any comments/criticism greatly appreciated. Thanks! :)

( We were sat at the bar... )

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[bebe1990.livejournal.com]

Hey, im new to this community aswell, i posted the first chapter to my story here yesterday, and this is the 2nd.

Id really like some comments on this, tell me what i need to change about it.

This one has a little warning too. Its not much just some kissing between 2 men, but that it i promise :)

( The Raven - Chapter 2: Pursuing A Nightmare ... )