Story I'm working on (called "Watch") Chapter 1 and 2

[greenfireguy.livejournal.com]

I'm working on this story.  I'm not sure how good it is, so I wanted to see how other people liked it.  Please feel free to criticize, comment, provide suggestions and just generally let me know what you think.  Thanks.

 

 

( Chapter 1 )

 

( Chapter 2 )

writers block

[narkkasu.livejournal.com]

What does everyone else do to get inspired to write? I just can't seem to get out what I want to say. I know whats happening in the story but the words just keep getting blocked. Any tips would be nice. ty.

(no subject)

[lil-eee.livejournal.com]

i need to write something for school.
something to impress the teacher
i had this great idea.
it's this kid, he's at his first concert. and everything is moving around him, while he just stands there and observes it all. But I don't know how to write it.
i got tired of it. and gave up.
i wrote one paragraph. and now i have nothing else.
any help?
or any other ideas for a short story?
( the paragraph )