So I figured it would make more sense if I posted chapter 1.

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I wrote this waaaay back when I was about 21 or 22, so, about seven or eight years ago. Please tell me if there are parts that don't make sense. I've already found and revised several mistakes.

( Chapter 1 of my as-yet-untitled book )

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BTW, Emyll's name is pronounced "em-EEL", not "EM-ull."