New and I bring a story too!

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I'm new and I hope it's ok to post my stories for some feedback.

Title: "Drowning Ourselves"
Author: Beth Tierney (rasputinsloved1), copyright holder.
genre: Romance, General.  Some humor.
Rating: pg-13 for cursing I guess...I don't know.
Summery:  Alaina Donovan is a writing student.  Zayd Bahr is a graduate student and artist.  Alaina lives above Zayd in Back Bay Boston, and, unfortunantly, has fallen in love with him and is too stupid and shy to tell him.
disclaimer:  I wrote this and the copyright is mine, don't use without premission.  Also, copyrighted song appears in this version, it's planned to be taken before publishing in other media. 

If you read it please tell me what you think, what needs improvement, all that.  It really helps a lot!  

Thank you!

( Drowning Ourselves )