First time post..

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So this is my first time posting here. I wrote a short story, and its actually the first story I've ever fully 'finished'. I was just wanting some feedback on it. Its a bit of Sci-Fi-ish, but written for a more general audience.

Enjoy!

( The Hunter and the Beast - A Short Story )

First time/help

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Hello all! I've been working bit by bit on an original story by the title of "Windborne". But, I'd like to hear what other people think, so I'v posted teh introductory chapeter, and if you have the spare time, come take a look!

 

( Windborne: The Coup )