Lonesome Plot Bunny Requests Attention From Critics

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[LJ Story] Part 7 & mad plot bunnies?

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I've posted part 7 of my story on my journal and would be very grateful if people could take a look... it's an conversation that reveals some backstory that will be important later on. But I tend to be heavy-handed with dialogue so if anyone could tell me how to improve and how to make this sound more natural... well, I will love you forever!

http://thorarosebird.livejournal.com/5534.html

Rating: PG
Genre: Fantasy
Length: approx 2000 words

And to make this more than an advertisement, I've been struggling to keep to one project for years, and it's even cropped up now. My question is, how do you deal with multiple, tantalising plot bunnies when you should be concentrating on one? Share your experiences and techniques with the pesky things. ^_^

thorarosebird