Same thing, but hopefully better

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Author: eltiteretista
Rating: M because of some kind of sex....not the kind that get you pregnant, but still. Also: homoerotism
Summary: I am not sure if I want this story to be horror or romance or both. I have a plot sorta outlined for this, but it is subject to change. Anyway, this starts with two lovers, only one of them is a murderer....see? I just ruined the first chapter suspense! How can anyone write a summary without giving something away? Must a be a skill! /rant
But I digress, here's my first part, hope you like it. I would like criticism and ideas, if possible. I am not very sensitive, so if you don't like it, feel free to tell me so.

PS: please send me a message (not a comment) if you see grammar mistakes, okay?

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